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2016-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Describe yourself in three words and explain. I can describe myself as a two faced person. I reckon expressing myself as a 3 works is quite complex issue for me to describe. Normally, many people say that i look like an introverted person. But if you know me more than a month, you will figure out that you've had a totally different idea. When i think about myself to be reflected to others, i tend to be not to talk more than a talkative person. As time flies, i have been learning bad lessons from social interactions, i know i need to fix this , but nowadays because of their busy life, we are likely to focus on own their life, i mean it is hard to keep contacting with others. So that is why i look like a quite person who would rather not to be more close.

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Hello there [이름]! Thank you very much for sending this in today. ^^ I am glad to know you more. I think you are not an introvert person. You are fun to talk to and very understanding person. That is why I am so blessed to have you as my student. I hope that you are having a great time learning with me. I already made the necessary corrections below. If you have any questions, comments or suggestions you can tell it to me in class. Have a great night. See you. Take care. Teacher Nina   Describe yourself in three words and explain.I can describe myself as a two faced person. >> correct I reckon expressing myself as a 3 works is quite complex issue for me to describe. >> Did you mean: I reckon expressing myself in three words is quite a complex issue for me to describe. Normally, many people say that i look like an introverted person. >> correct But if you know me more than a month, you will figure out that you\'ve had a totally different idea. >> correct When i think about myself to be reflected to others, i tend to be not to talk more than a talkative person. >> Did you mean: When i think about myself to be reflected by others, I tend not to talk more than a talkative person. As time flies, i have been learning bad lessons from social interactions, i know i need to fix this , but nowadays because of their busy life, we are likely to focus on own their life, i mean it is hard to keep contacting with others. >> As time flies, I have been learning bad lessons from social interactions, I know I need to fix this . But because of their busy life nowadays, we are likely to focus on own their life, I mean it is hard to keep contact with others. So that is why i look like a quite person who would rather not to be more close. >> correct

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