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2016-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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A exotic food that I have tried to eat was cheese steak. I ate cheese steak when I went on business trip in Philadelpia, America last year. Cheese steak was made by cheese,beef steaks and breads and was very big size. My co-work that he was working in America suggested me. It was more delicous to eat with coke. When I finished to eat the one, I was full and satisfied. If I will go to Philadelpia again, I will have to eat cheese steaks. My wife envyed me to eat ones because she loved beaf steak. I can't get the food out of my mind.

강사 첨삭

Hi Cool! ^^

Thank you for sharing your story. :)

It is my first time to know all about cheese steaks.

I googled it and wow! It looks delicious! ^^ I wish I could

go to Philadelphia so I could eat Cheese Steaks too. hehe. :)

Anyway, your business trip was worth it because of the amazing

experience that you had. :)

See you in class. :)

Take care :)


~~ Teacher Kris


A exotic food that I have tried to eat was cheese steak.

>> An exotic food that I have tried to eat was the Cheese Steak.
 I ate cheese steak when I went on business trip in Philadelpia, America last year.

>> I ate the Cheese Steak when I went on a business trip in Philadelphia, America last year.
 Cheese steak was made by cheese,beef steaks and breads and was very big size.

>> The Cheese Steak was made of cheese, beef steaks, and breads. The size was very large too.
 My co-work that he was working in America suggested me.

>> My co-worker who is working in America suggested it to me.
 It was more delicous to eat with coke.

>> Correct
 When I finished to eat the one, I was full and satisfied.

>> After eating, I was full and satisfied.
 If I will go to Philadelpia again, I will have to eat cheese steaks.

>> If I will go to Philadelphia again, I will eat Cheese Steaks.
 My wife envyed me to eat ones because she loved beaf steak.

>> My wife envied me because she loves beef steaks.
 I can\'t get the food out of my mind.

>> Correct

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