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Hi Cool! ^^
Thank you for sharing your story. :)
It is my first time to know all about cheese steaks.
I googled it and wow! It looks delicious! ^^ I wish I could
go to Philadelphia so I could eat Cheese Steaks too. hehe. :)
Anyway, your business trip was worth it because of the amazing
experience that you had. :)
See you in class. :)
Take care :)
~~ Teacher Kris
A exotic food that I have tried to eat was cheese steak.
>> An exotic food that I have tried to eat was the Cheese Steak.
I ate cheese steak when I went on business trip in Philadelpia, America last year.
>> I ate the Cheese Steak when I went on a business trip in Philadelphia, America last year.
Cheese steak was made by cheese,beef steaks and breads and was very big size.
>> The Cheese Steak was made of cheese, beef steaks, and breads. The size was very large too.
My co-work that he was working in America suggested me.
>> My co-worker who is working in America suggested it to me.
It was more delicous to eat with coke.
>> Correct
When I finished to eat the one, I was full and satisfied.
>> After eating, I was full and satisfied.
If I will go to Philadelpia again, I will have to eat cheese steaks.
>> If I will go to Philadelphia again, I will eat Cheese Steaks.
My wife envyed me to eat ones because she loved beaf steak.
>> My wife envied me because she loves beef steaks.
I can\'t get the food out of my mind.
>> Correct
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