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2016-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Today's homework is very difficult subject for me. Unfortunately, I haven't ever met role models that I would like to follow. Even If I have not met the ones, I have had a lot of time that I do for self-reflection so I have been did people not to cause harm. Actually, I have learned the men who act badly. When I saw the ones, I thought I never acted such as the men's acting. Naturally, I don't get to act badly. I think to make sure thatI hate behavior hates other people too. Moreover I sometimes have learned a lot to talk with people. It is important to realize about people that like things or hate things. Recently, I talk a lot with my coworker and my wife. The reason that I talk a lot with my coworker is that I stay long time in my office. We usually talk about project issues and family. The reason that I talk with my wife is that I need to talk with my wife about my children, encouranging word each other. If I have chance, I want to meet role model though.

강사 첨삭

Hi Cool!^^

I am sorry if this homework was a bit

difficult for you. I am glad though because

you answered it with your full potential. :)

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. :)

Family is always a family. :) Id we have problems,

we always ran into our families. Families are our ]

comfort zones so we have to be really thankful that

we have our families. :)

See you in class Cool :)


~~ Teacher Kris



Today\'s homework is very difficult subject for me.

>> Today\'s homework is a very difficult subject for me.
 Unfortunately, I haven\'t ever met role models that I would like to follow.

>> Correct
 Even If I have not met the ones, I have had a lot of time that I do for  self-reflection so I have been did people not to cause harm.

>> Even If I have not met the ones, I have had a lot of time that I do for  self-reflection so not to cause harm.
 Actually, I have learned the men who act badly.

>> Actually, I have learned from men who act badly.
 When I saw the ones, I thought I never acted such as the men\'s acting.

>> When I saw the ones, I thought I have never acted as such as the men who act badly.
 Naturally, I don\'t get to act badly.

>> Correct
 I think to make sure thatI hate behavior hates other people too.

>> I make sure that I will hate that kind of behavior that hates other people too.
 Moreover I sometimes have learned a lot to talk with people.

>> Moreover, I sometimes have learned a lot from talking with people.
 It is important to realize about people that like things or hate things.

>> It is important to learn from other people about things which are good or bad.
 Recently, I talk a lot with my coworker and my wife.

>> Recently, I communicate a lot with my co-workers and with my wife.
 The reason that I talk a lot with my coworker is that I stay long time in my office.

>> The reason that I communicate with my co-workers is that I stay a long time in my office.
 We usually talk about project issues and family.

>> Correct
 The reason that I talk with my wife is that I need to talk with my wife about  my children, encouranging word each other.

>> The reason that I talk with my wife is because of our children and I need her encouraging words as well.
 If I have chance, I want to meet role model though.

>> If I have a chance, I want to meet role models though.

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