Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Cool!^^
I am sorry if this homework was a bit
difficult for you. I am glad though because
you answered it with your full potential. :)
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. :)
Family is always a family. :) Id we have problems,
we always ran into our families. Families are our ]
comfort zones so we have to be really thankful that
we have our families. :)
See you in class Cool :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Today\'s homework is very difficult subject for me.
>> Today\'s homework is a very difficult subject for me.
Unfortunately, I haven\'t ever met role models that I would like to follow.
>> Correct
Even If I have not met the ones, I have had a lot of time that I do for self-reflection so I have been did people not to cause harm.
>> Even If I have not met the ones, I have had a lot of time that I do for self-reflection so not to cause harm.
Actually, I have learned the men who act badly.
>> Actually, I have learned from men who act badly.
When I saw the ones, I thought I never acted such as the men\'s acting.
>> When I saw the ones, I thought I have never acted as such as the men who act badly.
Naturally, I don\'t get to act badly.
>> Correct
I think to make sure thatI hate behavior hates other people too.
>> I make sure that I will hate that kind of behavior that hates other people too.
Moreover I sometimes have learned a lot to talk with people.
>> Moreover, I sometimes have learned a lot from talking with people.
It is important to realize about people that like things or hate things.
>> It is important to learn from other people about things which are good or bad.
Recently, I talk a lot with my coworker and my wife.
>> Recently, I communicate a lot with my co-workers and with my wife.
The reason that I talk a lot with my coworker is that I stay long time in my office.
>> The reason that I communicate with my co-workers is that I stay a long time in my office.
We usually talk about project issues and family.
>> Correct
The reason that I talk with my wife is that I need to talk with my wife about my children, encouranging word each other.
>> The reason that I talk with my wife is because of our children and I need her encouraging words as well.
If I have chance, I want to meet role model though.
>> If I have a chance, I want to meet role models though.
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