Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
It's been a really long time.
I have been good, but I miss you. ㅠㅠ
I had come here with my son, my niece, and my mother-in-law on 20 July.
At the first week in Malaysia, We went sightseeing around Kuala Lumpur.
After staying for 6 days, my mother-in-law came back to Korea because of her work in Korea.
Now, I am taking care of my son and my niece who is 13 years old.
They are attending a summer English camp here in Malaysia until the end of August.
I am also taking a English conversation class in the same Institute.
I have a class three times a week for two hours each class.
Malaysia had colonized by UK, so their English was influenced from them.
So, their English is somewhat different what I learned in Korea.
For exapmle, they use 'mum' instead of 'mom'.
"The text book is wrong" said my son.
Later, I found that this is because of British English.
Anyway, I'll keep in touch with you soon.
Take care, teacher.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee! I miss you so much!!! Thank you for updating me about your life in Malaysia. My mornings are not the same without you.
Anyway, I think you\'re going to have a bit of trouble because of the whole confusion between American and British English.
What you need to remember is the fact that you are most likely to use American English in your presentations and your paper.
Unless you are really planning to study (or migrate) in the U.K., or make a presentation there, then it\'s better to get used to American English.
Have fun there! Take care!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!It\'s been a really long time.
>> CORRECT!I have been good, but I miss you. ㅠㅠ
>> CORRECT!I had come here with my son, my niece, and my mother-in-law on 20 July.
>> I came here with my son, my niece, and my mother-in-law on July 20.
At the first week in Malaysia, We went sightseeing around Kuala Lumpur.
>> On our first week in Malaysia, we went sightseeing around Kuala Lumpur.After staying for 6 days, my mother-in-law came back to Korea because of her work in Korea.
>> After staying there for 6 days, my mother-in-law went back to Korea because of her work.Now, I am taking care of my son and my niece who is 13 years old.
>> Now, I\'m taking care of my son and my 13-year-old niece.They are attending a summer English camp here in Malaysia until the end of August.
>> CORRECT!
I am also taking a English conversation class in the same Institute.
>> I\'m also taking an English conversation class in the same institute.I have a class three times a week for two hours each class.
>> I have a class three times a week, for two hours.
OR:
>> I have a 2-hour class, three times a week.
Malaysia had colonized by UK, so their English was influenced from them.
>> Malaysia was a colony of the U.K. before, so their English was influenced by the British.So, their English is somewhat different what I learned in Korea.
>> Their English is somewhat different from what I\'ve learned in Korea.For exapmle, they use \'mum\' instead of \'mom\'.
>> CORRECT!
>> example\"The text book is wrong\" said my son.
>> CORRECT!Later, I found out that this is because of British English.
>> CORRECT!Anyway, I\'ll keep in touch with you soon.
>> CORRECT!Take care, teacher.^^
>> CORRECT!
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