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2016-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Discuss a special attribute or accomplishment that sets you apart I've never thought about a special attribute or accomplishment that sets my apart. And I don't think I have something special. But If I had to tell something one, I would tell that is my personality. Sometimes, I got a problem to meet new people however I usually enjoy to meet new people. there is a exact evidence about that I am good at make a good relationship with new people. I always have team project in class of my major. In order to make a good result, team member is very important. Because professors think that teamwork is very important for team project and good teamwork would make a good accomplishment as well. So most of students want to make a nice team. In case of me, I always make a good team. because of my personality. even if my team member hasn't known each other, I could make a good mood and lead them to good way for team project and accepted most of opinions. thus, I could get good score about projects

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Great day, [이름]!!! The most important thing is trying your best. I know your can really learn from our daily activities. Be confident in speaking English because you can see yourself speaking the language well in days to come. Have a great day~~~ Talk to you tomorrow and always be positive. T. Jeny   Discuss a special attribute or accomplishment that sets you apart >>correctI\'ve never thought about a special attribute or accomplishment that sets my apart. >>correctAnd I don\'t think I have something special. >>correct But If I had to tell something one, I would tell that is my personality. >>But If I had to tell one thing, I would tell that is my personality. Sometimes, I got a problem to meet new people however I usually enjoy to meet new people. >>Sometimes, I have a problem meeting new people however I usually enjoy it. there is a exact evidence about that I am good at make a good relationship with new people. >>There is an exact evidence why I am good at making a good relationship with new friends.. I always have team project in class of my major. >>I always have a class team project in my major. In order to make a good result, team member is very important. >>correct Because professors think that teamwork is very important for team project and good teamwork would make a good accomplishment as well. >>Because professors think that teamwork is very important for a team project and good teamwork would make a good accomplishment as well.  So most of students want to make a nice team. >>correct In case of me, I always make a good team. because of my personality. >>In my case, I always make a good team because of my personality. even if my team member hasn\'t known each other, I could make a good mood and lead them to good way for team project and accepted most of opinions. >>Even if my team members haven\'t known each other, I could make a good mood, lead them in the right way and listen to their opinions, thus, I could get good score about projects >>Thus, I could get good scores on projects.

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