homework
학생이 쓴 원문
We are four in the family. I have one sister. My father is an engineer and my mother id a housewife. My sister is web designer.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bo [이름]! ^^
Good job in writing about your family! ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
We are four in the family.
>> CORRECT
I have one sister.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I have a sister.
My father is an engineer and my mother id a housewife.
>> My father is an engineer and my mother is a housewife.
My sister is web designer.
>> My sister works as a web designer.
>>OR: My sister is a web designer.
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