homework.
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Hi there Mike Thank you so much for taking some time to do your homework. You are right in your opinion about the certain chores given to children. Great idea! You might be looking into the childhood of every child which I also agree. They should enjoy their childhood. Good job on your sentence construction. Keep it up Mikeee! I\'ll see you tomorrow!
Not good.
>>> YOU MEAN: It is not a good idea that children should have chores or tasks at home.
Children are too young to work chores or tasks.
>>> Children are too young to have household chores or task.
Children are busy playing game.
>>> Children are busy playing games.
OR YOU MEAN: Children should be playing games.
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