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2016-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I prefer to prepare and eat food at home since I like cooking and natural taste. Eating out is actually convenient and even economic because it needs some time to make and prepare some stuffs and ingredients. And also it sometimes makes leftovers. Back in the days, I used to prefer to go to the restaurants because it was better than homemade food by the way as I grow old it has been changed. I like foods with vegetables and plain taste which has natural taste of ingredients. Sometimes the foods sold at restaurants are pungent to me. So it made me try to cook what I want to eat at home and I recently bought my favorite famous chef’s book which is about natural foods.

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Hello [이름]! ^^   See you later~~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I prefer to prepare and eat food at home since I like cooking and natural taste. >> I prefer to prepare and eat at home since I like to cook homecooked meals.   Eating out is actually convenient and even economic because it needs some time to make and prepare some stuffs and ingredients. And also it sometimes makes leftovers. >> Eating our is actually convenient and even economic because cooking takes a lot of time for preparation and there might be leftovers.   Back in the days, I used to prefer to go to the restaurants because it was better than homemade food by the way as I grow old it has been changed. I like foods with vegetables and plain taste which has natural taste of ingredients. Sometimes the foods sold at restaurants are pungent to me. So it made me try to cook what I want to eat at home and I recently bought my favorite famous chef’s book which is about natural foods. >> Back in the day, I used to prefer going to restaurants because I thought it was better than homecooked meals but as I grew older, my tastes have changed to liking food with vegetables where they retain their natural flavors. There are times that restaurant food tastes stale for me so I picked up a cookbook about natural foods and started cooking at home.

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