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Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. I wolud rather live in a modern apartment than traditional house.As many people may know, traditional house might look more gorgeous and attractive by their own creativity.But tha word modern means that they've got more high advanced technology in the apartment with all aspect such as interior and duration and cold. Even though traditional house may has a good state to live, it sometimes doesn't enough to provide enough well being life than the modern one.it may not durable enough to endure cold inside because of the obsolete boiling system. Also , sometimes traditional one is far away from the main city which is located in remote country. it also has a chance to be dangerous being apart from concentrated houses.It is obvious that there are lots of merits for traditional house, but i am more like attracted by new one in case i am a rich.. :)

Great evening to you [이름]! Your ideas were awesome! I am so happy that you explain your ideas more in class and in writing. Keep up the good work. Kindly go over the corrections below. I didn\'t change the thought of your sentences. I based my corrections on the original ones. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class. See you. Good night. Can\'t wait to talk to you. Teacher Nina   I wolud rather live in a modern apartment than traditional house. >> I wolud rather live in a modern apartment than a traditional house. ( Don\'t forget your article. ^^) As many people may know, traditional house might look more gorgeous and attractive by their own creativity. >> As many people may know, traditional house might look more gorgeous and attractive becasue of its own creativity. But tha word modern means that they\'ve got more high advanced technology in the apartment with all aspect such as interior and duration and cold. >> Did you mean: But the word modern means that they\'ve got a more advanced technology in the apartment with all aspects such as interior, duration it was built and atmosphere. Even though traditional house may has a good state to live, it sometimes doesn\'t enough to provide enough well being life than the modern one. >> Did you mean: Even though a traditional house might has a good state to live in, it is sometimes not enough to provide good well being than the modern one. >> OR: Even though a traditional house might has a good state to live in, it is sometimes not enough to provide a good life than the modern one. it may not durable enough to endure cold inside because of the obsolete boiling system. >> Did you mean: It may not be durable enough to endure the cold inside because of the obsolete boiling system. Also , sometimes traditional one is far away from the main city which is located in remote country. >> Sometimes a traditional one is far away from the main city which is located in the remote country.it also has a chance to be dangerous being apart from concentrated houses. >> correct >> OR: It also has a chance to be dangerous being apart from the houses which are in a row. It is obvious that there are lots of merits for traditional house, but i am more like attracted by new one in case i am a rich.. :) >> It is obvious that there are lots of merits for traditional house, but I am more likely attracted to the new one in case I am a rich person.. :)