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2016-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I sometimes log-in the social net-working sites to see my friend lives and to left some comments to celebrate their birthday because I don't need to use it to keep my friendship more however many people have been using it. I think they consider it social life because most people are having a relationship out there in SNS. Users keep in touch with their real friends and share their lives each other through the web pages and chat with them. And some others make a new relationship there and even some people meet in person and make a real friendship. One of my friend is making a new relationship on instagram and it seems like a real relationship because they looked so friendly. I think it is going to be usual and I agree with the phenomenon but it is still unfamiliar to me.

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Hello [이름]!   Have a happy weekend~~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     I sometimes log-in the social net-working sites to see my friend lives and to left some comments to celebrate their birthday because I don\'t need to use it to keep my friendship more however many people have been using it. >> I sometimes log in onto social networking sites to see how my friends are living and to leave some comments when its their birthday but I rarely use social networking sites to maintain friendships unlike other people.   I think they consider it social life because most people are having a relationship out there in SNS. Users keep in touch with their real friends and share their lives each other through the web pages and chat with them. And some others make a new relationship there and even some people meet in person and make a real friendship. >> I think some people consider social networking sites as having a social life even going as far as to have relationships through these sites. Users keep in touch with their friends by chatting with them and sharing moments in their lives through the webpages. Some even make new relationships through SNS and then meet personally to make the friendship seem more real.   One of my friend is making a new relationship on instagram and it seems like a real relationship because they looked so friendly. I think it is going to be usual and I agree with the phenomenon but it is still unfamiliar to me. >> One of my friends made a new relationship on Instagram and it seems like a real relationship because they looked so friendly towards each other. I think this trend is going to be the norm and I\'m agreeable towards it although I still have reservations.

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