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The most recet risk that i have taken is the time when i've been to Sydney.Not like our country, I saw some articles at that time that a few Koreans has been killed by Aussie. Because of that news, i was horrified to go out late. In addition to help to read, I am really bad at locating the route. When i decied to travel by myself, my uncle suggested me going back to hotel at least by 6p.m. If i knew the situation what is going on in Australia, i wouldn't scare too much. But i hadn't had any idea. As soon as i had sightseen the area, i arrived at the central station at 6p.m. I made a reservation the hotel located near station.I thought that it was enough time to go back. Because of my poor locating skill, i wandered the same street more than 1 and a half hour. While i was looking for it, my eyes were full of tears with fears. I went to pub area by mistake which is dangerous.But luckily, one drunken man saved my life. Obviously, maybe i thought that he was more safer than wandering.

Good evening [이름]! Happy Friday again! Thank you so much for being a sweet student.You made my day! I\'m going to explain to you in class. ^^ I am more inspired to help you improve,Thank you very much for sharing your experiences. I had a great time reading your essay. You were able to express your ideas in writing! Keep it up! See you in class.Teacher Nina   The most recet risk that i have taken is the time when i\'ve been to Sydney. >> Better: The most recent risk that I have taken was the time I moved here in Sydney. ( Be careful with the spelling of the words. ^^) Not like our country, I saw some articles at that time that a few Koreans has been killed by Aussie. >> Not like our in country, I saw some articles at that time that a few Koreans have been killed by Aussie. Because of that news, i was horrified to go out late. >> correct ( Always write letter \"i\" in capital letter. ^^) In addition to help to read, I am really bad at locating the route. >> Did you mean: In addition, I am really bad at locating the route. >> OR: In addition, I have poor sense of direction. When i decied to travel by myself, my uncle suggested me going back to hotel at least by 6p.m. >> When I decided to travel by myself, my uncle suggested me to go back to the hotel at least by 6 p.m. ( Be careful with the spelling of the words. ^^) If i knew the situation what is going on in Australia, i wouldn\'t scare too much. >> If I knew the situation in Australia, I wouldn\'t be really scared. >> OR: If I knew what is going on in Australia, I wouldn\'t be that scared. But i hadn\'t had any idea. >> correct ( Always write letter \"i\" in capital letter. ^^) As soon as i had sightseen the area, i arrived at the central station at 6p.m. >> Did you eman: As soon as I saw the area, I knew I arrived at the central station at 6 p.m. I made a reservation the hotel located near station. >> I made a reservation at the hotel located near the station. ( Don\'t forget your preposition. ^^ ) I thought that it was enough time to go back. >> I thought the time was enough for me to go back. Because of my poor locating skill, i wandered the same street more than 1 and a half hour. >> I wandered on the same street for more than one and a half hour because of my poor sense of direction. (The underlined part is the most appropriate term for you to use. ^^) While i was looking for it, my eyes were full of tears with fears. >> While I as looking for it, my eyes were full of tears with fear. I went to pub area by mistake which is dangerous. >> correct But luckily, one drunken man saved my life. >> Luckily, one drunk man saved my life. ( Don\'t use but because it is a positive sentence. ^^)Obviously, maybe i thought that he was more safer than wandering. >> Did you mean: Obviously, I think he was safer than wandering. >> OR: Obviously, I think being with him was safer than wandering on the street.