homework
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Hi Cool! ^^
Your plan is absolutely fantastic! ^^
In fact, traveling around the world is an amazing experience. :)
So, that is really your dream :)
Don\'t worry, dreams do come true just keep on believing that
it will happen. :)
Thank you for your homework.
I will see you in class. :)
Take care :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Today\'s homework makes me happy when I think of that.
>> Correct
If I have 100,000 US dollars, I would go on a trip in all of world like America, Germany.
>> If I have 100,000 US dollars, I would go on a trip to all countries in the world like America and Germany.
Actually, I don\'t have enough money where to go on overseas trip with my family.
>> Actually, I don\'t have enough money to go on a trip overseas with my family.
My wife and I would like to eat exotic foods and traditional foods of foreign countries.
>> Correct
We really like to eat foods.
>> Correct
BETTER:
>> We really like to eat or taste some foods that we have never tasted before.
My children like to eat as well.
>> Correct
I can not get the cheese steak that I ate in Philadelpia out of my mind.
>> Correct
I want my wife to eat that food.
>> Correct
My wife wants to eat cheese steak in Phila as well.
>> My wife wants to eat Cheese Steak in Philadelphia as well.
We love that foods like Mexican foods.
>> We love that kinds of food like Mexican foods.
My wife and I like to see a exotic scenery too.
>> My wife and I like to see exotic scenery too.
When we stay a great scenery, we feel better and fly a stress.
>>When we stay at a great scenery, we fell better and our stresses vanish away.
Therefore I want to go on a world trip with my family when I would have a lot of money
>> Therefore, I want to on a trip around the world with my family if I have a lot of money.
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