Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
SENTENCE FRAGMENTS
Choose whether or not each of the following sentences is a fragment or a complete sentence. Fill in the blanks with either FRAGMENT or COMPLETE.
EX: While I was on vacation. -FRAGMENT
1. In many of the novels that he read.
-> Fragment
2. His dog followed him home.
-> Complete
3. Laughter, the best medicine.
-> Fragment
4. He called her cunning, though she really wasn’t.
-> Complete
5. When can you call me?
-> Complete
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The weather is so hot. The sun is too hot too, And finally I watched the movie, Harry Potter And The Deathly Hallows: Part 2, 2011! I didn't watched Part 1, but I can understand the story. Harry's son is so cute, but I think the name of "Albus" is fit on his son. It's old little bit, I think. Anyway, I want to tell you about Harry Potter on tomorrow. Let's go to the magical world.kkkk. See you!
강사 첨삭
A pleasant Monday, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for your active participation in our class.
You\'re doing a great job! :)
Study harder and soon you will be like the English speaker you\'ve been dreaming of.
See you!! I\'m excited to hear your stories. :) I miss you!
Teacher Carmen ^^
1. In many of the novels that he read.FRAGMENT>> Correct! 2. His dog followed him home.COMPLETE>> Correct!3. Laughter, the best medicine.FRAGMENT>> Correct!4. He called her cunning, though she really wasn’t.COMPLETE>>Correct!5. When can you call me?COMPLETE
>> Correct!
The weather is so hot.
>> Correct!
The sun is too hot too,
>> The sun is shinning so bright too.
And finally I watched the movie, Harry Potter And The Deathly Hallows: Part 2, 2011!
>> Finally, I watched the movie, \"Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows\" part 2, which was shown in 2011.
I didn\'t watched Part 1, but I can understand the story.
>> I didn\'t watch part 1, but I can understand the story.
Harry\'s son is so cute, but I think the name of \"Albus\" is fit on his son.
>> Harry\'s son is so cute, but I think his name, Albus, doesn\'t fit him.
It\'s old little bit, I think.
>> I think that it\'s a little old for him.
Anyway, I want to tell you about Harry Potter on tomorrow.
>> Anyway, I want to tell you something about Harry Potter tomorrow.
Let\'s go to the magical world.kkkk. See you!
>> Correct!
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