Homework

2016-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: SENTENCE FRAGMENTS Choose whether or not each of the following sentences is a fragment or a complete sentence. Fill in the blanks with either FRAGMENT or COMPLETE. EX: While I was on vacation. -FRAGMENT 1. In many of the novels that he read. -> Fragment 2. His dog followed him home. -> Complete 3. Laughter, the best medicine. -> Fragment 4. He called her cunning, though she really wasn’t. -> Complete 5. When can you call me? -> Complete -- The weather is so hot. The sun is too hot too, And finally I watched the movie, Harry Potter And The Deathly Hallows: Part 2, 2011! I didn't watched Part 1, but I can understand the story. Harry's son is so cute, but I think the name of "Albus" is fit on his son. It's old little bit, I think. Anyway, I want to tell you about Harry Potter on tomorrow. Let's go to the magical world.kkkk. See you!

강사 첨삭

A pleasant Monday, [이름]! ^^   Thank you for your active participation in our class. You\'re doing a great job! :) Study harder and soon you will be like the English speaker you\'ve been dreaming of. See you!! I\'m excited to hear your stories. :) I miss you!   Teacher Carmen ^^   1. In many of the novels that he read.FRAGMENT>> Correct! 2. His dog followed him home.COMPLETE>> Correct!3. Laughter, the best medicine.FRAGMENT>> Correct!4. He called her cunning, though she really wasn’t.COMPLETE>>Correct!5. When can you call me?COMPLETE >> Correct!   The weather is so hot. >> Correct! The sun is too hot too, >> The sun is shinning so bright too. And finally I watched the movie, Harry Potter And The Deathly Hallows: Part 2, 2011! >> Finally, I watched the movie, \"Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows\" part 2, which was shown in 2011. I didn\'t watched Part 1, but I can understand the story. >> I didn\'t watch part 1, but I can understand the story. Harry\'s son is so cute, but I think the name of \"Albus\" is fit on his son. >> Harry\'s son is so cute, but I think his name, Albus, doesn\'t fit him. It\'s old little bit, I think. >> I think that it\'s a little old for him. Anyway, I want to tell you about Harry Potter on tomorrow. >> Anyway, I want to tell you something about Harry Potter tomorrow. Let\'s go to the magical world.kkkk. See you! >> Correct!

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