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2016-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Several days after we came back from Paris. _____FRAGMENT----- 2. The ocean water is still cold in June. ____COMPLETE_____________ 3. Ah, yes, the famous painter. _____FRAGMENT_____________ 4. He was responsible for all of this. _____COMPLETE_____________ 5. While he pretended like he didn’t know, we all knew that he was lying. ____COMPLETE______________

강사 첨삭

  Good day, [이름]! ^^   Congratulations for doing an excellent job today! Practice makes perfect. So keep on practicing at home so you can be better in no time! See you! :)   Teacher Carmen ^^   1. Several days after we came back from Paris.FRAGMENT>> Correct!2. The ocean water is still cold in June.COMPLETE>> Correct!3. Ah, yes, the famous painter.FRAGMENT>> Correct!4. He was responsible for all of this.COMPLETE>> Correct!5. While he pretended like he didn’t know, we all knew that he was lying.COMPLETE >> Correct!

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