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2016-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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This homework is a question my opinion about the business of fimilies. I thought I don't like to run business of fimilies. The reason is when fimilies run business, they interfere each other. Running own business, it often happens problems. Whenever it do it, this cage has trobles with family's interference. The general companies that fimilies don't run have meeting when they has problems They can solve the problems systematically without emotional issues. If I run my own business, I wouldn't have to run with my wife and fimily. I don't want emotional issues with my family. I always want to be happy with my family.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Hwang! I can see how much you loved your family and that\' s a good thing. Thank you for saharing your thoughts.:-)   ~~~Teacher Kris     This homework is a question my opinion about the business of fimilies. >> This homework is a question about my opinion on family businesses.I thought I don\'t like to run business of fimilies. >> I thought I don\'t like to run a business with my family.The reason is when fimilies run business, they interfere each other. >>The reason is when a family runs a business they will interfere with each other.Running own business, it often happens problems. >> Running your own business often cause problems.Whenever it do it, this cage has trobles with family\'s interference. >> Whenever it does this cause trouble and families interfere. The general companies that fimilies don\'t run have meeting when they has problems >>General companies that doesn\'t run by a family only have meetings when they have a probelm.They can solve the problems systematically without emotional issues. >> Correct OR: They were able to solve the problems without any emotional issues.If I run my own business, I wouldn\'t have to run with my wife and fimily. >> If I have my own business, I am not going to run it with my family.I don\'t want emotional issues with my family. >> I don\'t want to have emotional issues with my family.I always want to be happy with my family. >>  I always want my family to be happy.

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