homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, Hwang!
You are right, a manager and a leader has different roles when
it comes to their responsibilities.
And both of them are needed for the projects to be successful.
As leaders one of their responsibility is to make sure that their
members are well enough to do the work.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Well don! :)
~~~ Teacher Kris
I think the differences between a Manager and a Leader is responsibiity.
>> I think the difference between a manager and a leader is their responsibilty.
The managers plan schedule of projects that is new or ongoing.
>> The managers plan the schedules of the projects that are new and ongoing.
They have duty to check it whether the projects are going as planned or not.
>> It\'s their duty to check if the projects goes as planned or not.
Leader lead his team members so he has to manage managers.
>> The leader leads the team and he controls the managers.
He has responsibility that the projects succeed or fail.
>> He is responsible if the project succeeds or not.
Leader is to manage everthing for the projects.
>> The leader is the one who manage everything about the project.
He has to know the condition of his team members even.
>> He has to know the conditions of his team members.
If one of team members is sick, the projects might put off the deadline.
>> If one of the members is sick, the projects\' deadline should be delayed.
Leader has a big power while he gets a lot of stress.
>> The leader has the power but he also suffers from a lot of stress.
I think leader is very inportant person that the projects succeed.
>> I think the leader is a very important person for the project to succeed.
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