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2016-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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When I fight with my friend or my sister (In fact, I have a older sister), he or she is in my hair for a long time. Because that is so tired and troil thing, I do not fight with other people as soon as possible. Yesterday, I argue with my order sister because of very trifling thing. After that, I feel uncomfortable at all night. Of course we solve our problem today, so I get out her of my hair. However the experience that someone is in my hair is very energy-consumed thing, anytime.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Sarah! Thank you for doing your homework. I\'m glad you understood the meaning of that idiom. Good job here! ^^ Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ When I fight with my friend or my sister (In fact, I have a older sister), he or she is in my hair for a long time. >> When I fight with my friend or my sister (I have an older sister), she gets in my hair for a long time. Because that is so tired and troil thing, I do not fight with other people as soon as possible. >> Since that is so tiring, I try not to fight with other people as often as possible.Yesterday, I argue with my order sister because of very trifling thing. >> Yesterday, I argued with my older sister because of a very trifling thing. After that, I feel uncomfortable at all night. >> After that, I felt uncomfortable all night. Of course we solve our problem today, so I get out her of my hair. >> Of course, we solved our problem today so I got her out of my hair. However the experience that someone is in my hair is very energy-consumed thing, anytime. >> However, having someone get in my hair always consumes a lot of my time and energy.

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