Homework

2016-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. irrelevant-The material for our project was irrelevant what we were supposed to 2. exact - what is the exact symbol of this shape? 3. suitable- This cloth is not suitable for formal interview. 4. abroad - If you want to broaden your prospect, you had better go abroad 5. attire-what kind of attire are you looking for? Do you have something special for your attire in your mind? Nina, thank you for your understanding, today i cried with my friends. one of my best friend will go back to his country :( see you !

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework.I am sorry to hear that one of your bestfriends will go back to his country. ^^ Cheer up! I hope that you will spend time with him someday. You did a good job with your sentences. Keep it up! You just interchanged some of the words that led that changed the meaning of your sentence. Don\'t worry, we are working it now. Hope you will have enough rest tonight. Can\'t wait to hear your stories tomorrow. See you. Sweet dreams. Teacher Nina   1. irrelevant-The material for our project was irrelevant what we were supposed to >> Did you mean: The material for our project was irrelevant.2. exact - what is the exact symbol of this shape? >> correct 3. suitable- This cloth is not suitable for formal interview. >> Better: This clothing is not suitale for a formal interview. 4. abroad - If you want to broaden your prospect, you had better go abroad >> If you want to broaden your perspective, you better go abroad. 5. attire-what kind of attire are you looking for? Do you have something special for your attire in your mind? >> What kind of attire are you looking for? Are you going to attend a special event? Nina, thank you for your understanding, today i cried with my friends. >> correct one of my best friend will go back to his country :( >> One of my best friends will back to his country. see you ! >> correct

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