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2016-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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These days, I was very busy so I am late to do my homework. In general, I get up at 5:30 AM The reason that I get up eary is that I work out in the gym at 6 AM everyday and I leave at home at 7 AM because I have to get to work at 7:45 AM. My morning time is very busy due to have to get up early. If my morning is same weekend's morning, Fristly, I would get up at 7 AM. In other words, I would sleep 1 hour more. Secondly,I would work out for 2 hours. Actually, I usually work out for 30 minutes because I don't have enough time to do exercises. Also my mind is to get to wind down. If I don't work out, I would definitely sleep more but I think that it is very important for me to get good health so I don't stop to work out in the early morning. I don't work out at night because I get off from work late and I have to study English at night. Therefore, I want to get the more time in the morning.

강사 첨삭

Hello Hwang! :)


You did a good job on your homework today! :)

It really surprises me how early you wake up everyday! :0

I myself can not wake up at 5:30 in the morning because it\'s really cold.

But you\'re right! :) Going to the gym or exercising is one way of staying healthy. It does have a lot of benefits.

Don\'t worry for one day your body will get used to that routine. :)


I hope you\'re not too tired when we have our classes! :)

Get some rest if you can and always take care of yourself.



----- Teacher Kris :)




These days, I was very busy so I am late to do my homework.

>> I  am very busy these days so I am always late in doing my homework.
In general, I get up at 5:30 AM.

>> Correct
The reason that I get up eary is that I work out in the gym at 6 AM everyday and I leave at home at 7 AM because I have to get to work at 7:45 AM.
>> The reason why I get up early is that I work out everyday at the gym at 6 AM and I leave home at 7 AM because I have to get to work by 7:45 AM.

My morning time is very busy due to have to get up early.

>> My mornings are very busy because I have to get up early.

If my morning is same weekend\'s morning, Fristly, I would get up at 7 AM.

>> If my mornings would be the same as weekend mornings, firstly, I would get up at 7 AM.
In other words, I would sleep 1 hour more.

>> In other words, I would sleep for one more hour.
Secondly, I would work out for 2 hours.

>> Correct
Actually, I usually work out for 30 minutes because I don\'t have enough time to do exercises.
>> Correct

Also my mind is to get to wind down.

>> Also, my mind needs to wind down.
If I don\'t work out, I would definitely sleep more but I think that it is very important for me to get good health so I don\'t stop to work out in the early morning.
>> If I don\'t work out, I would definitely sleep more, but I think it is very important for me to have good health that\'s why I don\'t stop working out early in the morning.

OR:

If I don\'t work out, I can sleep more. But I think it is important for me to be healthy that\'s why I don\'t stop working out early in the morning.

I don\'t work out at night because I get off from work late and I have to study English at night.
>> Correct

Therefore, I want to get the more time in the morning.

>> Therefore, I work out in the morning because I have more time.

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