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2016-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Hello teacher. We talked some about Ebonics last class so you gave me homework about one. Acually, I want to learn natural English now. The reason that I want to learn natural English is why I have to converse with my foreign customer. My customers visit in my company once in a while so I should attend a business meeting. I want to converse with foreign customer a lot but I am not used to speaking English yet so when we have meetting, I speak English a little. I have planed being good at English next year. If I would be good at speaking English, and then I would like to learn Ebonics. My company in America works a lot of African American That's why I want to learn Ebonics. I will learn Ebonics though YouTube.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday, Hwang! :)



It\'s good to hear from you! :)

I hope you had a really good weekend.


Thank you for sharing with me how important the English language is for you.

Indeed, the English language is not only the most common language spoken all over the world but it has also become the language of business nowadays.

A lot of businessmen are trying to learn English so they can converse well with their clients.


You did a good job on your homework today! :)

Do your best and keep practicing and I\'m sure you\'re going to be good at speaking English soon. :)

Well done!




---- Teacher Kris :) 




Hello teacher.
>> Correct

We talked some about Ebonics last class so you gave me homework about one.
>> We talked about Ebonics during our last class and you gave me a homework about it.

Acually, I want to learn natural English now.
>> Actually, I want to learn natural English now.

The reason that I want to learn natural English is why I have to converse with my foreign customer.
>> The reason why I want to learn natural English is that I want to converse well with my foreign customers.

My customers visit in my company once in a while so I should attend a business meeting.
>> My customers visit my company once in a while so I should attend business meetings.

DID YOU MEAN:

>> My customers visit my company once in a while and we conduct business meetings.

I want to converse with foreign customer a lot but I am not used to speaking English yet so when we have meetting, I speak English a little.
>> I want to converse with foreign customers a lot but I am not used to speaking English. And when we have meetings, I only speak English a little.

I have planed being good at English next year.
>> I have planned to be good at English next year.

OR:

My target would be being good at English next year.

If I would be good at speaking English, and then I would like to learn Ebonics.
>> After being good at speaking English, I would like to learn Ebonics.

My company in America works a lot of African American
>> My company in America works with a lot of African American people.

That\'s why I want to learn Ebonics.
>> Correct

I will learn Ebonics though YouTube.

>> I will learn Ebonics through YouTube.

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