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2016-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Question: What are the advantages of backpacking? Beginnig of backpacking is literally 'backpacking'. In this beginning part, we have to dicide what we have to put in. As the trip is longger, our package is need to be minimum. Backpacking is similar with our lives. In long journey of life, people always clarify the things we need or not. In terms of this, the advatage of backpacking is to make we think about ourselves.

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Good evening, [이름]!   Happy Monday! ^_^   Thank you so much for accomnplishing your homework. I liked how you compared backpacking to our lives. I definitely agree with what you\'ve said. We can\'t have it all.. that\'s a famous line or expression. We need to be aware of the things that we really want; things that we desire the most; things that we need the most.   Have a good night! :)   _Teacher Mayleen_   Beginnig of backpacking is literally \'backpacking\'.In this beginning part, we have to dicide what we have to put in. >> Backpacking is literally using a just a backpack when travelling.As the trip is longger, our package is need to be minimum. >> The journey is longer so it\'s practical to bring only a few stuff.Backpacking is similar with our lives. >> Correct!In long journey of life, people always clarify the things we need or not. >> In the long journey of live, people always clarify their needs.In terms of this, the advatage of backpacking is to make we think about ourselves. >> In this case, the advantage of backpacking is for us to realize or recognize ourselves better.

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