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2016-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Essay Writing: Are you or would you like to be vegetarian? Why/ Why not? I'm not a vegetarian and I don't want to be a vegetarian. Of course I enjoy eating vegetable every eating time and I like it. And I think that eating vegetable is the best to heip you lose weight but I think that it is important to eat meat for our healthy eating. I don't think to criticize about vegetarian because I think that it is personal preference and I respect them.

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Good afternoon [이름]! Thank you so much for your time. I hope that you had a great time last weekend. I already made the necessary corrections below. See you in class. Teacher Nina   Essay Writing:Are you or would you like to be vegetarian? Why/ Why not?I\'m not a vegetarian and I don\'t want to be a vegetarian. >> correct Of course I enjoy eating vegetable every eating time and I like it. >> Of course, I enjoy eating vegetables when I eat and I like it. And I think that eating vegetable is the best to heip you lose weight but I think that it is important to eat meat for our healthy eating. >> And I think that eating vegetables is the best to heip you lose weight but it is also important to eat meat to be healthy. I don\'t think to criticize about vegetarian because I think that it is personal preference and I respect them. >> I don\'t  criticize vegetarian people because I think that is their preference and I respect it.

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