Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay Writing:
Are you or would you like to be vegetarian? Why/ Why not?
I'm not a vegetarian and I don't want to be a vegetarian.
Of course I enjoy eating vegetable every eating time and I like it.
And I think that eating vegetable is the best to heip you lose weight but I think that it is important to eat meat for our healthy eating.
I don't think to criticize about vegetarian because I think that it is personal preference and I respect them.
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Essay Writing:Are you or would you like to be vegetarian? Why/ Why not?I\'m not a vegetarian and I don\'t want to be a vegetarian.
>> correct Of course I enjoy eating vegetable every eating time and I like it.
>> Of course, I enjoy eating vegetables when I eat and I like it. And I think that eating vegetable is the best to heip you lose weight but I think that it is important to eat meat for our healthy eating.
>> And I think that eating vegetables is the best to heip you lose weight but it is also important to eat meat to be healthy.
I don\'t think to criticize about vegetarian because I think that it is personal preference and I respect them.
>> I don\'t criticize vegetarian people because I think that is their preference and I respect it.
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