Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I'm Kaylee.
I'm still in Malaysia, but I'm going back to Korea soon.
I have been good here in Malaysia.
I'm sure that I'm satisfied with the life in Malaysia.
Last week, my family went to Johorbaru, which is located in near Singapore.
There is Legoland in Johorbaru. That's why my family decided to visit there.
In Legoland, there are a theme park and a water park, so we could enjoy two places at one time.
Actually, I felt the ticket prices burden because the ticket per one person was about 2,800 peso. I could buy these tickets as discounted prices through the online website.
They provide discounted ticket price if the custumer puchase them a week ago.
So, I got 20% discont.
We stayed there until the end time in order to get conpensated fully.
My son was really exited there, so we promised to come again here this winter.
Thank you for reading through.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee!
It\'s been a while! Thank you for updating me about your life in Malaysia.
I\'m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Take care!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!I\'m Kaylee.
>> This is [Name].I\'m still in Malaysia, but I\'m going back to Korea soon.
>> CORRECT!I have been good here in Malaysia.
>> CORRECT!
OR:
>> I have been doing well here in Malaysia.I\'m sure that I\'m satisfied with the life in Malaysia.
>> I\'m pretty satisfied with my life here in Malaysia.Last week, my family went to Johorbaru, which is located in near Singapore.
>> Last week, my family went to Johorbaru which is located near Singapore.There is Legoland in Johorbaru.
>> Legoland is in Johorbaru.
That\'s why my family decided to visit there.
>> That\'s why my family decided to go there.In Legoland, there are a theme park and a water park, so we could enjoy two places at one time.
>> There is a theme park and a water park in Legoland, so we were able to enjoy two different places at the same time.Actually, I felt the ticket prices burden because the ticket per one person was about 2,800 peso.
>> Actually, I felt like the ticket prices were too expensive because it was 2,800 pesos per person.
I could buy these tickets as discounted prices through the online website.
>> I could buy discounted tickets online.They provide discounted ticket price if the custumer puchase them a week ago.
>> They provide a discount if the customers purchase the ticket a week prior to their visit.So, I got 20% discont.
>> So I got a 20% discount.We stayed there until the end time in order to get conpensated fully.
>> We stayed there until the closing time in order to get our money\'s worth.My son was really exited there, so we promised to come again here this winter.
>> My son got really excited there so we promised to come back on winter.Thank you for reading through.^^
>> CORRECT!
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