homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you wear jewelry?
Yes. l wear jewelry.
If so, what kind of jewelry do you wear?
I wear ring and choker.
How often do you wear jewelry?
I wear jewelry sometime.
What is your most valuable piece of jewelry?
My most valuable piece of jewelry is choker.
강사 첨삭
Hello there princess [이름]! I am very happy to know that you like wearing jewelries. It makes you more beautiful! Kikiki By the way, in this homework of yours, you did a good job in your sentence construction. You just have to be mindful of the usage of the articles such as \"A\" and \"The.\" Nice work! Keep it up! I\'ll see you in a bit! Mwuah!
Do you wear jewelry?Yes. l wear jewelry.>>> BETTER: Yes, I like to wearing jewelry.If so, what kind of jewelry do you wear?I wear ring and choker.>>> BETTER: I usually wear a ring and a choker.How often do you wear jewelry?I wear jewelry sometime.>>> I seldome use jewelries.What is your most valuable piece of jewelry?My most valuable piece of jewelry is choker. >>> My most valuable piece of jewelry is my choker because....
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