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I absolutely agree that familiarity or closeness could prevent people from developing or maintaining respect for others. Some people are introverts while the others are extroverts. The outgoing people tend to have fun whenever they meet other people, so they are apt to be misunderstood due to their careless behaviors. On the contrary, some people who have introvertive natures are prone to being hurted by other people's manners and talks. I believe respect always pays even between siblings, so we are better off showing respect to friends rather than expressing something without any self-restaint.
Moreover, we need to pay attention to situation ethics. If we don't care about it, we are apt to make a big mistake. Familiarity or closeness doesn't mean defing a decent manner. A Korean proverb says,"We can pay off a load of debts with just a word."
In conclusion, respect is the best policy to make friends and maintain the friendship. We need to live up to expectations of our everlastin
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Thank you for doing your homework Sir^^
This is like an enlightenment :)
How about you? What kind of personality do you have?
I absolutely agree that familiarity or closeness could prevent people from developing or maintaining respect for others.
>>CORRECT!
Some people are introverts while the others are extroverts.
>>Some people are introverts while others are extroverts.
The outgoing people tend to have fun whenever they meet other people, so they are apt to be misunderstood due to their careless behaviors.
>>Outgoing people tend to have fun whenever they meet other people, so they are apt to be misunderstood due to their careless behavior.
On the contrary, some people who have introvertive natures are prone to being hurted by other people\'s manners and talks.
>>On the contrary, some people who have introvertive nature are prone to being hurt by other people\'s manners and talks.
I believe respect always pays even between siblings, so we are better off showing respect to friends rather than expressing something without any self-restaint.
>>CORRECT!Moreover, we need to pay attention to situation ethics.
>>CORRECT!
If we don\'t care about it, we are apt to make a big mistake.
>>CORRECT!
Familiarity or closeness doesn\'t mean defing a decent manner.
>>Familiarity or closeness doesn\'t mean defying a decent manner.
A Korean proverb says,\"We can pay off a load of debts with just a word.\"
>>CORRECT!In conclusion, respect is the best policy to make friends and maintain the friendship.
>>In conclusion, respect is the best policy to make friends and maintain friendship.
We need to live up to expectations of our everlastin
>>(Please continue, Mr. [이름]^^)
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