Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay Writing:
Do you think that happiness lies within you? Or does it depend upon other people and external things?
I think that it is need to help you to keep happiness lies within you now and then.
Though to be in a difficult your situation,you have to keep going on with your confidence which you can do it,I guess.
I think that everything is in your thought and happiness lies can be true when you do your best now and then.
강사 첨삭
Good day to you [이름]!
Happy Tuesday.All of the things you mentioned below are right.
Happiness really lies within you.
I hope that you will always be happy.
See you tomorrow. Take care.
Teacher Nina
Essay Writing:Do you think that happiness lies within you? Or does it depend upon other people and external things?I think that it is need to help you to keep happiness lies within you now and then.
>> Did you mean: I think happiness lies within you every now and then. Though to be in a difficult your situation,you have to keep going on with your confidence which you can do it,I guess.
>> Did you mean: I guess, even though you are in a difficult situation, you have to keep going with confidence. I think that everything is in your thought and happiness lies can be true when you do your best now and then.
>> I think that everything in your even happines lies within you when you do your best every now and then.
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