homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is one thing about your life that you would not change?
Hmmm.... I feel nothing has changed greatly.
But I gets the sixth grade, It is something different.I feeI.
I don't reason, My friend have change.
And the study is a little more difficult.
No other thing.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! You\'re right! Everything will change when you grow older. Wether in school, with your friends and even with the lessons in your class. Just be strong and be who you are no matter what the changes will happen in your life.. Okay? As they say, change is the only constant thing in this world.. So be strong! hmmm.. I\'ll see you in a bit!
What is one thing about your life that you would not change?Hmmm.... I feel nothing has changed greatly.
>>> CORRECT.But I gets the sixth grade, It is something different.I feeI.
>>> But when I was in my sixth grade, I felt that there is something different.I don\'t reason, My friend have change.
>>> I don\'t know the reason but my friend has change differently.And the study is a little more difficult.
>>> And the lessons in school is more difficult.No other thing.
>>> Nothing more..
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