Homework

2016-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Because I fired at the leopard, he shook my arm. 2. Arranged marriages are unusual in the West. In the Middle East, on the other hand, they are common. 3. The job wasn't very interesting. Due to this, the money was OK. 4. The train was late. Due to this I managed to reach in time. 5. The British may have done some good in India. Even so colonialism is basically bad.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!^^

Thank you for your homework. Please check and review my corrections.

~Kelly^^

1. Because I fired at the leopard, he shook my arm.
>> As I fired at the tiger, he shook my arm.
2. Arranged marriages are unusual in the West. In the Middle East, on the other hand, they are common.
>> Correct.
3. The job wasn\'t very interesting. Due to this, the money was OK.
>> The job wasn’t very interesting. Mind you, the money was OK.
4. The train was late. Due to this I managed to reach in time.
>> The train was late. In spite of this, I managed to reach on time.
5. The British may have done some good in India. Even so colonialism is basically bad.

>> Correct.

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