homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Cool! ^^
Thank you for answering you homework today. :)
I definitely agree with you that when people are stressed and tired
they tend to do their work inefficiently. That is true! ^^
By the way, please study your corrections that I have provided for you. :)
Have a great weekend.
See you on our class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Hello teacher.
>> Correct
I am happy because today is my dayoff so I watched a movie during staying home.
>> I am happy because today is my day off so I watched a movie at home.
The subject of this homework is always being to do for me.
>> The subject of this homework is somewhat related to my life at work
My boss always give me over three works or projects.
>> My boss always gives me over three works or projects.
The reason that I get off from work late is due to this.
>> Correct
I sometimes drive up the wall when my boss give me another works while i am workig a lot.
>> It sometimes drive up the wall when boss gives me another work while I am working a lot.
Though, I have to work again to comprehend because my boss is working a lot as well.
>> Even though, I have to work it because I also understand that my boss is working a lot as well.
I think so many works are inefficient because when people work a lot, they get tired and stress and then it can\'t come to good results.
>> I came to think that many works are done inefficiently because when people work a lot, they get tired and stressed. So, it can\'t come to good results.
I think it is important for me to do efficient work rather than so many works.
>> I think it is important for me to do efficient work than to do many works that are done inefficiently.
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