homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi Cool! ^^
Thank you for making sharing your thoughts today. :)
You really are a person who is against violence. :)
You are right! It is not good to fight either orally or physically with
other people. You will not gain anything good from that.
It is great that you know how to resist fighting. :)
Thank you so much. I will see you in class.
~~ Teacher Kris
I am doing homework after I went to public bathhouse in my apartment.
>> I am doing my homework after I went to the public bath house at my apartment.
Actually, I haven\'t ever made enemies.
>> Correct
I used to some fight with friends but we were soon friends again.
>> I used to fight with my friends orally and physically but we became friends again.
I am pacifist so I don\'t like fight.
>> I am a pacifist so I don\'t like fighting or violence.
I always try to do not fight.
>> I always try to resist fighting.
If people misunderstand me, I try to solve my mistake.
>> Correct
As a matter of fact, I don\'t care about what people think about me so even if they think me enemy, I don\'t think enemy their.
>> As a matter of fact, I don\'t care about what people think about me so even if they think me as an enemy, I don\'t think the same way to them.
The reason is that I have a lot of work so I dont\'t want to care other things.
>> Correct
Also, I always think people will become to meet someday again so I don\'t make enemies.
>> Also, I always think of better people who I can meet someday so I don\'t like making enemies.
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