homework
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Hi Cool! ^^
Thank you for making your homework today. :)
So, you really envy Superman, don\'t you? kiki.
Everyone does, actually. We wish we could do the impossible
but we are human beings without super powers. kiki
Truth hurts. :) Dreaming is free to do. But, we can make things possible
as long as their are effective ways to do it. :)
See you in class.
~~ Teacher Kris
Today\'s homework reminds my childhood because i often thought to be super hero when i was young.
>> Today\'s homework reminds me about my childhood because I often ought to be a super hero when I was young.
When I was young, I want to be a superman. Because the superman can fly everywhere so I really envy him.
>> When I was young, I wanted to be Superman because Superman can fly everywhere so I really envy him.
If I would be able to fly everywhere, I wanted to go up highest buildings, mountains and then jump down at the highest ones.
>> If I would be able to fly, I would go up the highest building and mountains then jump down.
But dream is dream.
>> But, dream is a dream.
These days, I have watched super hero\'s movies a lot like iron man, avengeres and so on.
>> These days, I have watched super hero movies like Iron Man, Avengers, and so on and so fort.
I really love that movies. Because I have vicarious satisfaction from that movies about impossibility.
>> I really love those movies because I have vicarious satisfaction from those movies about impossibility.
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