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2016-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Can you talk about the three people who have influenced your life? I think that person who has influenced my life is my parents. I had influenced my life that they had been thinking, habit and old custom while I was grown up. Even if the things that they(thinking,habit,custom of my paernts) are right or wrong, my parents gave me a lot of influence of my life and I think that it is my share which if I will accept them(thinking,habit,custom of my paernts) or not

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Good day to you [이름]! How are you? Did you have a good weekend. I guess we are the same. It still depends on the person if they wil adapt it or not. I am excited to hear your ideas in class. See you. Teacher Nina   Can you talk about the three people who have influenced your life?I think that person who has influenced my life is my parents. >> I think the people who have influenced my life are my parents. I had influenced my life that they had been thinking, habit and old custom while I was grown up. >> Did you mean: They have influenced my life by the way of their thinking, habits, customs that I saw when I was growing up. Even if the things that they(thinking,habit,custom of my paernts) are right or wrong, my parents gave me a lot of influence of my life and I think that it is my share which if I will accept them(thinking,habit,custom of my paernts) or not >> Even if the things that they think about, habits, custom of my parents are right or wrong, those influenced me. I think it is my choice if I will adapt it or not.

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