Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
It's been a long time.
I've just called the customer service center to restart my class starting tomorrow.
I'm going to have a class at 9:50 because you don't have any available time before 9:50 am.
I'm sure that you're a really competent teacher everybody wants to study with.^^
I'm happy that I can keep studying with you.
However, in some aspects, I'm so sorry that you don't have any break time before my time.
I should try to make you laugh more from now on.
Anyway, I have lot of things to tell you about my life in Malaysia, including a very suprising news.
See you tomorrow.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee! WELCOME BACK!
I\'ve missed you so much!
You do owe me lots of stories about your stay in Malaysia.
I\'m also pleased that we can start chatting again. Talk to you tomorrow!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!It\'s been a long time.
>> CORRECT!I\'ve just called the customer service center to restart my class starting tomorrow.
>> CORRECT!I\'m going to have a class at 9:50 because you don\'t have any available time before 9:50 am.
>> CORRECT!
OR:>> I\'m going to have a class at 9:50 because you don\'t have any available time before that. - betterI\'m sure that you\'re a really competent teacher everybody wants to study with.^^
>> I\'m sure that you\'re a really competent teacher who everybody wants to study with.^^I\'m happy that I can keep studying with you.
>> CORRECT!However, in some aspects, I\'m so sorry that you don\'t have any break time before my class time.
>> CORRECT!I should try to make you laugh more from now on.
>> CORRECT!Anyway, I have lot of things to tell you about my life in Malaysia, including a very suprising news.
>> CORRECT!
>> surprisingSee you tomorrow.^^
>> CORRECT!
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