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One of the biggest problems to the old aged is whether or not they have prepared for the old age. Needless to say, if someone has not prepared for his future or there is no one to help him out, the rest of his life must be miserable and challenging to him. However, it must be a blessing to anyone who has lived prudently and endusiastically since his young age.
The Krean government received heavy criticisms during the SARS outbreak for its reluctance to release related information. Taking immmediate actions to epidemic deseases is always necessary, as if lions or tigers show quick responses to some preys. However, we are sometimes susceptible to making a mistake because of emotional quick responses. In personal matters, An 'easy going manner' is often condusive to preventing from mistakes. 'Ho Si Wu Bo,' the saying means that " See like a tiger and walk like an ox." The hidden meaning is that you should prepare to quickly respond anytime while we are contemplating before acting.
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Being your teacher is such a blessing^^
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One of the biggest problems to the old aged is whether or not they have prepared for the old age.
>>CORRECT!
Needless to say, if someone has not prepared for his future or there is no one to help him out, the rest of his life must be miserable and challenging to him.
>>CORRECT!
However, it must be a blessing to anyone who has lived prudently and endusiastically since his young age.
>>However, it must be a blessing to anyone who has lived prudently and enthusiastically since his young age.The Krean government received heavy criticisms during the SARS outbreak for its reluctance to release related information.
>>The Korean government received heavy criticisms during the SARS outbreak for its reluctance to release related information.
Taking immmediate actions to epidemic deseases is always necessary, as if lions or tigers show quick responses to some preys.
>>CORRECT!
However, we are sometimes susceptible to making a mistake because of emotional quick responses.
>>However, we are sometimes susceptible to making a mistake because of quick emotional responses.
In personal matters, An \'easy going manner\' is often condusive to preventing from mistakes.
>>In personal matters, an \'easy-going manner\' is often conducive to preventing oneself from mistakes.
\'Ho Si Wu Bo,\' the saying means that \" See like a tiger and walk like an ox.\"
>>\'Ho Si Wu Bo,\' is a saying that means, \"See like a tiger and walk like an ox.\"
The hidden meaning is that you should prepare to quickly respond anytime while we are contemplating before acting.
>>CORRECT!
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