Homework

Hello, teacher. It is raining here in Seoul. I guess this is an autumn rain this year.^^ Could you read and review some compositions below? I'm filling the application form of the elementary school in Malaysia for my son. Junyoung's mother tongue is Korean. So, it would really help him adjust to school life if he get English learning support from ISKL. Junyoung's parents support his education by believing and loving him very much. They encourage him to do it on his own. Moreover, they are ready to answer his questions. This child acts calmly and autonomously under any circumstances. Particularly, Junyoung has great consideration for others, and knows how to express sympathy with others.

Hi there, Kaylee! I checked your composition below. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!It is raining here in Seoul. >> CORRECT!I guess this is an autumn rain this year.^^>> I guess this is the first autumn rain this year.Could you read and review some of the compositions below? >> CORRECT!I\'m filling the application form of the elementary school in Malaysia for my son. >> I\'m filling up the application form of the elementary school in Malaysia for my son.Junyoung\'s mother tongue is Korean. >> CORRECT! So, it would really help him adjust to school life if he get English learning support from ISKL.>> So it would really help him adjust well to school life if he gets an English learning support from ISKL.Junyoung\'s parents support his education by believing and loving him very much. >> Junyoung\'s parents support his education by believing in him and giving him much love. They encourage him to do it on his own. >> They encourage him to do everything on his own. Moreover, they are ready to answer his questions. >> CORRECT!This child acts calmly and autonomously under any circumstances. >> This child acts calmly and independently under any kind of situation. Particularly, Junyoung has great consideration for others, and knows how to express sympathy with others. >> Junyoung especially has great consideration and he knows how to express sympathy for others.