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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Essay: Why are selfies so popular? Are there places you should never take selfies? As the device of taking photo developes, making self-photo is easier and more common. That's why almost people enjoy the taking picture. Eledry people took pics while they were watching beautiful scenery. Young woman wants their best self-shot. Newly wedd couple makes their babies photo. Memory of having fun or something memorable kept in their cell by a high-definition image. It is very natuaral for people to take selfies . But some case doesn't need to be kept by a electric device like emergency or tragic accident.

Hi there, [이름]!   You are certainly right. There are some events that need not be captured by these gadgets. I liked how you supported your idea with several examples or situations, good job! ^^ I have made some modifications though. Thank you so much for this composition. ^_^   _T. Mayleen_   As the device of taking photo developes, making self-photo is easier and more common. >> As device for taking photos develops, making selfies is now easier.   That\'s why almost people enjoy the taking picture. >> That\'s why most people enjoy taking pictures.   Eledry people took pics while they were watching beautiful scenery. >> Elderly people take pictures while watching beautiful sceneries.   Young woman wants their best self-shot. >> A young woman wants to capture her best pose.   Newly wedd couple makes their babies photo. >> Newly wed couples take their babies\' photos.   Memory of having fun or something memorable kept in their cell by a high-definition image. >> Memories can now be kept in our cellphones in high quality images.   It is very natuaral for people to take selfies.>> It\'s become natural for people to take selfies.   But some case doesn\'t need to be kept by a electric device like emergency or tragic accident. >> But in some cases, unfortunate events like accidents need not be captured by our electronic devices.