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2016-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, I felt better a little yesterday because I took a cold pill. I agree with you we didn't share enough number 3 question from our text book so I am type my opinion as below. I really don't like to borrow money from not only friends but also families. The reason that I hate to borrow moneny is if I borrow money from friends, I keep to care for the money until paying back. My friends who borrow money keep to care until receiving the money from me. That's why I hate to borrow money. If I would borrow money from money unwillingly, I must pay back next day. Actually, I have never borrowed money from my friends but I have been borrowed money to my friends. However, I don't like to be borrowed to my friends as well.

강사 첨삭

Yahooooo!!  Sangguk, Hwang,

 

It\'s nice to  hear   the good news that  you have been better than yesterday. Please continue to  take your medicine so that  you will  get better soon.

 

Though you had a cold, Thank you very much for  doing your  homework.

By  the way, please read my  corrections below.

 

~~ Teacher Kris

 

Today, I felt better a little yesterday because I took a cold pill.

>> Today, I felt better than yesterday because I  took my  medicine.
I agree with you we didn\'t share enough number 3 question from our text book so I am type my opinion as below.

>> I  agree with you, we didnt  share enough from our textbook so  I wrote my  opinions below.
I really don\'t like to borrow money from not only friends but also families.

>> CORRECT

   OR:

>> I really don\'t like borrowing money from friends and families.
The reason that I hate to borrow moneny is if I borrow money from friends, I keep 
to care for the money until paying back.

>> The reason  why  I  hate to  borrow money  from  friend is  I\'ll  keep thinking until I paid  back.
My friends who borrow money keep to care until receiving the money from me.

>> My friend who  lent the  money keeps on asking until  I pay back.

That\'s why I hate to borrow money.

>> CORRECT !
If I would borrow money from money unwillingly, I must pay back next day.

>> If I will  borrow money  from  money  lending, I  must pay back the next day.
Actually, I have never borrowed money from my friends but I have been borrowed money to my friends.

>> Actually,  I  never borrow money  from  friends but I lent them money.
However, I don\'t like to be borrowed to my friends as well.

>> However, I don\'t like to  lend money as much  as possible.


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