homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Yahooooo!! Sangguk, Hwang,
It\'s nice to hear the good news that you have been better than yesterday. Please continue to take your medicine so that you will get better soon.
Though you had a cold, Thank you very much for doing your homework.
By the way, please read my corrections below.
~~ Teacher Kris
Today, I felt better a little yesterday because I took a cold pill.
>> Today, I felt better than yesterday because I took my medicine.
I agree with you we didn\'t share enough number 3 question from our text book so I am type my opinion as below.
>> I agree with you, we didnt share enough from our textbook so I wrote my opinions below.
I really don\'t like to borrow money from not only friends but also families.
>> CORRECT
OR:
>> I really don\'t like borrowing money from friends and families.
The reason that I hate to borrow moneny is if I borrow money from friends, I keep
to care for the money until paying back.
>> The reason why I hate to borrow money from friend is I\'ll keep thinking until I paid back.
My friends who borrow money keep to care until receiving the money from me.
>> My friend who lent the money keeps on asking until I pay back.
That\'s why I hate to borrow money.
>> CORRECT !
If I would borrow money from money unwillingly, I must pay back next day.
>> If I will borrow money from money lending, I must pay back the next day.
Actually, I have never borrowed money from my friends but I have been borrowed money to my friends.
>> Actually, I never borrow money from friends but I lent them money.
However, I don\'t like to be borrowed to my friends as well.
>> However, I don\'t like to lend money as much as possible.
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