homework :)
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Hi there, Sarah!
Thanks for doing your homework.
I would love to agree with you, but I am more sensitive toward the heat than the cold.
That\'s why I would choose a rainy weather over a hot and sunny one.
As long as the rain isn\'t too heavy.
You did pretty good here.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
I like a hot and sunny weather all year long more than a cold and rainy one.
>> I prefer a hot and sunny weather all year long more than a cold and rainy one.
The reason is very simple.
>> CORRECT!
Just because I don’t like rainy weather.
>> I just don\'t like rainy weather.
Of course I don’t like a hot weather and a cold weather, but I can stand those weather with air conditioner or air heater.
>> Of course I neither like a hot or cold weather, but I can stand those weather with the help of an air conditioner or a heater.
However there is no method to stand moist air.
>> However, there is nothing that could help me stand the humidity.
In rainy day, I become very floopy all day long.
>> On rainy days, I feel floppy all day long.
That feeling likes that my body is full of water especially in my arms and legs.
>> It feels like my body is full of water, especially my arms and legs.
Some of movies describe rainy day as something romantic, but I can not agree that.
>> Some movies describe rainy days as something romantic, but I disagree.
Before my mind feels romantic, my body feels s[이름]py and tired.
>> Before I could feel romantic, my body would feel s[이름]py and tired.
For that reason, I think a hot and sunny weather is better than a cold and rainy one.
>> CORRECT!
(In fact, I don’t like a hot weather either.
>> Actually, I don\'t like the hot weather too.
I just like sunny weather!)
>> CORRECT!
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