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2016-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I like a hot and sunny weather all year long more than a cold and rainy one. The reason is very simple. Just because I don’t like rainy weather. Of course I don’t like a hot weather and a cold weather, but I can stand those weather with air conditioner or air heater. However there is no method to stand moist air. In rainy day, I become very floopy all day long. That feeling likes that my body is full of water especially in my arms and legs. Some of movies describe rainy day as something romantic, but I can not agree that. Before my mind feels romantic, my body feels s[이름]py and tired. For that reason, I think a hot and sunny weather is better than a cold and rainy one. (In fact, I don’t like a hot weather either. I just like sunny weather!)

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Sarah!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I would love to agree with you, but I am more sensitive toward the heat than the cold.

That\'s why I would choose a rainy weather over a hot and sunny one.

As long as the rain isn\'t too heavy.

You did pretty good here.

Please check my corrections below.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~

I like a hot and sunny weather all year long more than a cold and rainy one.

>> I prefer a hot and sunny weather all year long more than a cold and rainy one.
 The reason is very simple.

>> CORRECT! 

Just because I don’t like rainy weather.

>> I just don\'t like rainy weather.
 Of course I don’t like a hot weather and a cold weather, but I can stand those weather with air conditioner or air heater. 

>> Of course I neither like a hot or cold weather, but I can stand those weather with the help of an air conditioner or a heater.
However there is no method to stand moist air.

>> However, there is nothing that could help me stand the humidity.
 In rainy day, I become very floopy all day long. 

>> On rainy days, I feel floppy all day long.
 That feeling likes that my body is full of water especially in my arms and legs.

>> It feels like my body is full of water, especially my arms and legs.
 Some of movies describe rainy day as something romantic, but I can not agree that.

>> Some movies describe rainy days as something romantic, but I disagree.

Before my mind feels romantic, my body feels s[이름]py and tired.

>> Before I could feel romantic, my body would feel s[이름]py and tired.
 For that reason, I think a hot and sunny weather is better than a cold and rainy one.

>> CORRECT! 

(In fact, I don’t like a hot weather either.

>> Actually, I don\'t like the hot weather too.

I just like sunny weather!)

>> CORRECT!

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