homework :)

Hello there, Sarah!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I\'m a bit confused. So do you think it\'s better to leave or to change the \'temple\'?

Anyway, please be consistent with your verb tenses.

Check my corrections below.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~

In Korea, there is very similar proverb, “If a monk hates temple, he gets out of the temple.”

>> In Korea, there is a very similar proverb, \"If a monk hates the temple, he should get out of the temple\".
I thought of that proverb when I was middle school student because I could not agree with policy of education.

>> I thought of that proverb when I was in middle school because I did not agree with the education policy.

I could not understand why I have to go school and take classes which look like meaningless.

>> I could not understand why I had to go to school and take classes, which were meaningless in my opinion.

In addition, I don’t want to join in unlimited competition for academic ability. 

>> In addition to that, I didn\'t want to join in the endless academic competition.
I was always in the top ten of the middle school, so that worry is not just for evasion of the reality.

>> I was always in the top ten in middle school, so that worry is not just because of escaping reality.

However when I thought of that proverb, I felt that is similar with evasion of the reality.

>> However, when I thought of that proverb, I felt like it is similar to escaping reality.

Rather, I thought if I hate ‘temple’, I have to try to change that ‘temple’.

>> Rather, I thought that if I hate the \'temple\', I have to try to change that \'temple\'.
For that reason, I decided to study more to change policy of education. 

>> For that reason, I decided to study more to change the policy of education.
 Since that time, my dream is making my own middle and high school.

>> Since then, my dream has been to establish my own middle school and high school.
I thought making my own school is more effective for a change of policy than being the Minister of Education. lol

>> I thought establishing my own school is more effective in changing the education policy than being the Minister of Education.
 However I think leaving temple is often better than changing temple, actually.

>> However, I also think that leaving the temple is often better than changing the temple.