HOMEWORK

2016-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

"Old soldiers never die; they just fade away," said Douglas MacArthur. My secret talent is an ability of concentration and delicacy. I've never nodded off in any class in my life. I can really concentrate on lectures. I still remember that several times I lost my parents in the center of a crowded city market because then I focused my concentration on a variety of goods out there. My concentration strongly demonstrates at dawn, therefore, when I have to come up with some important idea, I have used it early in the morning. I don't trust someone distracted because his work must be inefficient and ended up with bad results. I was good at geometry and graphics at school. Those sujects need much sensitivity in addition to his deep insight. I have never had my wife iron my shirts, pants, and the like, because i am disagreeable to her work. When we make a report, both its contents and fancy composition are equally crucial. I love these two talents whether my friends admit it or not.

강사 첨삭

Whew, knowing General MacArthur through history made me a closer to this topic^^ Thank you for doing your homework, Mr. [이름]! I know focus is something not everyone easily does, so consider yourself gifted^^ \"Old soldiers never die; they just fade away,\" said Douglas MacArthur. >>CORRECT!My secret talent is an ability of concentration and delicacy. >>My secret talent is the ability of concentration and delicacy.  I\'ve never nodded off in any class in my life. >>CORRECT! I can really concentrate on lectures. >>CORRECT! I still remember that several times I lost my parents in the center of a crowded city market because then I focused my concentration on a variety of goods out there. >>I still remember the several times I lost my parents in the center of a crowded city market because I focused my concentration on a variety of goods out there. My concentration strongly demonstrates at dawn, therefore, when I have to come up with some important idea, I have used it early in the morning. >>My concentration strongly demonstrates at dawn, therefore, when I have to come up with some important idea, I used it early in the morning. I don\'t trust someone distracted because his work must be inefficient and ended up with bad results. >>I don\'t trust someone distracted because his work must be inefficient and might end up with bad results. I was good at geometry and graphics at school. >>CORRECT! Those sujects need much sensitivity in addition to his deep insight. >>Those subjects need much sensitivity in addition to deep insight.  I have never had my wife iron my shirts, pants, and the like, because i am disagreeable to her work. >> I have never had my wife iron my shirts, pants, and the like, because I am disagreeable to her work. When we make a report, both its contents and fancy composition are equally crucial. >>CORRECT! I love these two talents whether my friends admit it or not. >>CORRECT!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·