Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee!
Thanks for doing your homework.
I think it is awful that you had to adjust to a new environment when you barely adapted to the previous one.
Don\'t worry about postponing your class. I was able to take a rest then too. :)
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!
I am sorry that I postponed my class without any notice.
>> CORRECT!
Then, I went to my academic advisor\'s office with a phone call from him.
>> I went to my academic adviser\'s office at that time after receiving a phone call from him.
I will tell you more about it in detail on Monday.
>> CORRECT!
In my early working days, I was assigned to work in the marketing 2 team.
>> CORRECT!
However, a short time later, my team was integrated with the marketing 1 team as part of restructuring.
>> CORRECT!
While restructuring, some of the employees, including me, were moved to other departments.
>> CORRECT!
In those days, I thought that everything went to hell on a handbasket.
>> Back then, I thought that everything went to hell in a handbasket.
After assigned to the marketing 2 team, I barely adjusted to the new surrounding.
>> After getting assigned to the marketing 2 team, I barely had time to adjust to the new environment.
It seemed to be terrible that I had to adjust to the new department again.
>> It seemed terrible that I had to adjust to a new department again.
Actually, I had hart time to adapt to my new department.
>> Actually, I had a hard time adapting to my new department.
In particular, I felt difficulty in having a good relationship with the people there.
>> In particular, I had a difficult time in having a good relationship with the people there.
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