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2016-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I am sorry that I postponed my class without any notice. Then, I went to my academic advisor's office with a phone call from him. I will tell you more about it in detail on Monday. Writing Task!Give an example situation (or your own experience) when everything went to "hell in a handbasket". In my early working days, I was assigned to work in the marketing 2 team. However, a short time later, my team was integrated with the marketing 1 team as part of restructuring. While restructuring, some of the employees, including me, were moved to other departments. In those days, I thought that everything went to hell on a handbasket. After assigned to the marketing 2 team, I barely adjusted to the new surrounding. It seemed to be terrible that I had to adjust to the new department again. Actually, I had hart time to adapt to my new department. In particular, I felt difficulty in having a good relationship with the people there.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I think it is awful that you had to adjust to a new environment when you barely adapted to the previous one.

Don\'t worry about postponing your class. I was able to take a rest then too. :)

Please check my corrections below.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~

Hello, teacher.

>> CORRECT!
 I am sorry that I postponed my class without any notice.

>> CORRECT!
 Then, I went to my academic advisor\'s office with a phone call from him.

>> I went to my academic adviser\'s office at that time after receiving a phone call from him.
 I will tell you more about it in detail on Monday.

>> CORRECT!
In my early working days, I was assigned to work in the marketing 2 team.

>> CORRECT!
 However, a short time later, my team was integrated with the marketing 1 team as part of restructuring.

>> CORRECT!
 While restructuring, some of the employees, including me, were moved to other departments.

>> CORRECT!
 In those days, I thought that everything went to hell on a handbasket.

>> Back then, I thought that everything went to hell in a handbasket.
 After assigned to the marketing 2 team, I barely adjusted to the new surrounding. 

>> After getting assigned to the marketing 2 team, I barely had time to adjust to the new environment.
 It seemed to be terrible that I had to adjust to the new department again.

>> It seemed terrible that I had to adjust to a new department again.
 Actually, I had hart time to adapt to my new department.

>> Actually, I had a hard time adapting to my new department.
 In particular, I felt difficulty in having a good relationship with the people there.

>> In particular, I had a difficult time in having a good relationship with the people there.

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