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Now that I am not young, needless to say, I would prefer to stay in the office all the time rather than working outside. Youths had better have a lot of experience as a sales person to be promoted to a higher rank or to run their own businesses in the near future. Sales jobs require enormous outside activities and meeting many kinds of customers. Hence, outside jobs make youths versatile, flexible, persevering and even audacious. Those things are not merits achievable from the office work. Meanwhile, working inside deserves several advantages. Someone could nurture reasoning, analyzing and planning through the office work, so called a paper-work. No matter how well some people work outside, we need a long-term plan and strategy for the company. We need anyone who manages to come up with some strategy for the company. To tell the truth, the office work is more suitable for me than the outside work, because it seems to me that writing and planning are more self-confident than talking.

I am really impressed with the words you use, Mr. [이름]^^ I always look forward to talking with you! Yes, I think choosing a job is vital, since it comprises half of our lives! Thank you for doing your homework :) Now that I am not young, needless to say, I would prefer to stay in the office all the time rather than working outside. >>Now that I am not young, needless to say, I would prefer to stay in the office all the time rather than work outside.  Youths had better have a lot of experience as a sales person to be promoted to a higher rank or to run their own businesses in the near future. >> Youths had better have a lot of experience as a salesperson to be promoted to a higher rank or to run their own businesses in the near future. Sales jobs require enormous outside activities and meeting many kinds of customers. >>CORRECT! Hence, outside jobs make youths versatile, flexible, persevering and even audacious. >>CORRECT!  Those things are not merits achievable from the office work. >>CORRECT!Meanwhile, working inside deserves several advantages. >>CORRECT! Someone could nurture reasoning, analyzing and planning through the office work, so called a paper-work. >>Someone could nurture reasoning, analyzing and planning through the office work, so called a paperwork. No matter how well some people work outside, we need a long-term plan and strategy for the company. >>CORRECT!  We need anyone who manages to come up with some strategy for the company. >>CORRECT! To tell the truth, the office work is more suitable for me than the outside work, because it seems to me that writing and planning are more self-confident than talking. >>To tell the truth, the office work is more suitable for me than the outside work, because it seems to me that I am more confident in writing and planning than talking.