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2016-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Is a meaning of “head over heels” that “falling in love” with someone? If it is right, my last time that I was “head over heels” is three years ago, with my boyfriend. Rather, I am being “head over heels” with my boyfriend. Since I am a logical person than an emotional person (by MBTI type. do you know MBTI?), I never have been fallen in love at first sight with anyone or anything. Therefore, I think that I am being “head over heels” with my boyfriend. In my last homework, I wanted to write why I thought that leaving the temple is often better than changing the temple, but I didn’t have enough space for more sentence. I just thought changing the temple is better than leaving the temple when I was in middle school, but I realized that in fact there are many situations that leaving is more good choice for me some years later. There is a proverb in Korea, “We escape a dung, not because it is scare but because it is dirty” I think there are many situations like this proverb.

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Hello there, Sarah! Thanks for doing your homework. I bet you are still head over heels with your boyfriend. That\'s lovely. Please check my corrections here. Take note of the proper verb tenses, okay? Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Is a meaning of “head over heels” that “falling in love” with someone? >> Does \"head over heels\" mean you \"fall in love\" with someone?If it is right, my last time that I was “head over heels” is three years ago, with my boyfriend.>> If I\'m right then the last time that I was \"head over heels\" was three years ago, with my boyfriend. Rather, I am being “head over heels” with my boyfriend. >> Specifically, I am still head over heels with my boyfriend.Since I am a logical person than an emotional person (by MBTI type. do you know MBTI?), I never have been fallen in love at first sight with anyone or anything. >> Since I am more of a logical than an emotional person, I have never fallen in love at first sight with anyone.  Therefore, I think that I am being “head over heels” with my boyfriend.>> Therefore, I think that I am still head over heels with my boyfriend.In my last homework, I wanted to write why I thought that leaving the temple is often better than changing the temple, but I didn’t have enough space for more sentences. >> CORRECT! I just thought changing the temple is better than leaving the temple when I was in middle school, but I realized that in fact there are many situations that leaving is more good choice for me some years later. >> I just thought changing the temple is better than leaving the temple when I was in middle school, but I realized that, in fact, there are many situations where leaving is a better choice for me after a few years. There is a proverb in Korea, “We escape a dung, not because it is scare but because it is dirty” >> There is a proverb in Korea that goes like this, \"We avoid a dung not because it is scary, but because it is dirty.\" I think there are many situations like this proverb. >> I think there are many situations where this proverb applies to.

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