homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to live high on the hog more than a simple and ordinary life.
Of course, each life has its good and bad points.
Living high on the hog can make person forget importance of trivial.
However, I don’t want to waste my life by ‘simple’ and ‘ordinary’ times.
If we can satisfy ourselves and appreciate for little things, even if it is not high on the hog, it is not a simple and ordinary life either.
For this reason, I don’t want to live a simple and ordinary life, so I will chose high on the hog life!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Sarah!
Thanks for doing your homework.
You did very well here.
I would also love to live high on the hog.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
I want to live high on the hog more than a simple and ordinary life.
>> I prefer to live high on the hog over a simple and ordinary life.Of course, each life has its good and bad points.
>> CORRECT! Living high on the hog can make person forget importance of trivial.
>> Living high on the hog can make a person forget about the importance of trivial matters.However, I don’t want to waste my life by ‘simple’ and ‘ordinary’ times.
>> However, I don\'t want to waste my life doing simple and ordinary things.If we can satisfy ourselves and appreciate for little things, even if it is not high on the hog, it is not a simple and ordinary life either.
>> If we can satisfy ourselves and appreciate the little things, even if it is not living high on the hog, it won\'t be a simple and ordinary life either.For this reason, I don’t want to live a simple and ordinary life, so I will chose high on the hog life!
>> For this reason, I don\'t want to live a simple and ordinary life so I will choose to live high on the hog.
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