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2016-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Essay Writing: What do you hope to do in your life? What I'd like to do in my life is that I'd like to design of shoes until the end of my ability and I'd like to make money to plan for my later years. Likewise I'd like to have many experience through a trip another place wherever I still haven't been to go.

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Hello there [이름]! Thank you so much for your time. I appreciate that you did your homework. I hope you can design a pair of shoes for me. Hihihi. I wish that you will be successful in the future. Have a great day. Teacher Nina   Essay Writing:What do you hope to do in your life?What I\'d like to do in my life is that I\'d like to design of shoes until the end of my ability and I\'d like to make money to plan for my later years. >> What I\'d like to do in my life is that I\'d like to design shoes until I can and I\'d like to make money to plan for my later years.Likewise I\'d like to have many experience through a trip another place wherever I still haven\'t been to go. >> I\'d also like to have many experiences through a trip to another place I haven\'t been to.

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