HOMEWORK

Hi Hwa Shin!

Good evening! ^^

Thank you so much for your composition. ^^

Good job on this dear.

I\'ll see you in class.

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

I am grateful for my health.

>> Correct

But I didn\'t recognize its importance before.

>> Correct

When I raise heavy things I feel my bone ache.

>> Correct

or

>> When I try to lift heavy things, I would feel my bone ache.

When I climb the mountain I feel my knee ache.

>> When I do mountain climbing, my knee aches.

So I do not overexercise. I eat calcium supplement for my bone.

>> Correct

I am thankful of my not having severe disease until now.

>> I am thankful for not having severe disease until now.