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2016-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. Do you happen to have a sore throat today? Your voice sounded not good unlike usual. I hope you will get back in good condition. Writing task!When was the last time that you "learned something by heart"?What was it? Two years ago, I took a comprehensive test in my department. The school policy allows only the students who pass the comprehensive test write their dissertation. This test is composed of three specific subjects such as political thoughts, international politics, and comparative politics. In order to pass this test, I learned a lot of my notes by heart. Back then, I especially had hard time to learn some of scholars' name and their works by heart. Fortunately, I passed the test and could acquire qualification to write my master's dissertation. Now, I need to pass the test again in order to get qualification to write my doctor's dissertation.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee! Thank you for doing your homework. As I get older, I find it difficult to learn anything by heart. I have this annoying hacking cough, which is why my voice has been terribly nasal these days. I\'m sorry about that. Check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Do you happen to have a sore throat today? >> CORRECT!Your voice sounded not good unlike usual. >> Your voice didn\'t sound as good as usual.I hope you will get back in good condition.>> I hope you get better soon.Two years ago, I took a comprehensive test in my department. >> CORRECT!The school policy allows only the students who pass the comprehensive test write their dissertation. >> CORRECT!This test is composed of three specific subjects such as political thoughts, international politics, and comparative politics. >> CORRECT!In order to pass this test, I learned a lot of my notes by heart. >> CORRECT!Back then, I especially had hard time to learn some of scholars\' name and their works by heart. >> Back then, I had a hard time learning some of the scholars\' names and their works by heart.Fortunately, I passed the test and could acquire qualification to write my master\'s dissertation. >> Fortunately, I passed the test and got qualified to write my master\'s dissertation. Now, I need to pass the test again in order to get qualification to write my doctor\'s dissertation. >> Now, I need to pass the test again in order to get qualified to write my doctor\'s dissertation.

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