Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
Writing task!What can you see kitty-corner from your house/apartment?
My apartment is in a very big apartment complex.
There are approximately 700 units in it.
In addition to my apartment complex, there are several big apartment complex near hear.
So, I can see another apartment building kitty-corner from my apartment.
I wish I can see a nice landscape kitty-corner from my apartment.
However, I know that it's hard to see a nice landscape kitty-corner from an apartment in the city such as Seoul.
Fortunately, my apartment complex has a nice garden which has lots of cherry blossom trees.
Sometimes, I am out in the garden with my family, and enjoy the picnic.
So, I'm satisfied with my apartment even though I cannot enjoy the landscape kitty-corner from my apartment.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Kaylee!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Although I don\'t live in a big city like you, there is also nothing spectacular about the view kitty-corner from my apartment.
It\'s just an auto-shack center with lots of cars.
Please check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!My apartment is in a very big apartment complex.
>> CORRECT!There are approximately 700 units in it.
>> CORRECT!In addition to my apartment complex, there are several big apartment complex near hear.
>> CORRECT!
*hereSo I can see another apartment building kitty-corner from my apartment.
>> CORRECT!I wish I can see a nice landscape kitty-corner from my apartment.
>> CORRECT!However, I know that it\'s hard to see a nice landscape kitty-corner from an apartment in the city such as Seoul.
>> However, I know that it\'s hard to see a nice landscape kitty-corner from an apartment in a city such as Seoul.Fortunately, my apartment complex has a nice garden which has lots of cherry blossom trees.
>> CORRECT!Sometimes, I am out in the garden with my family, and enjoy the picnic.
>> Sometimes I go out and enjoy a picnic in the garden with my family.So, I\'m satisfied with my apartment even though I cannot enjoy the landscape kitty-corner from my apartment.
>> CORRECT!
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