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2016-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Writing task!What can you see kitty-corner from your house/apartment? My apartment is in a very big apartment complex. There are approximately 700 units in it. In addition to my apartment complex, there are several big apartment complex near hear. So, I can see another apartment building kitty-corner from my apartment. I wish I can see a nice landscape kitty-corner from my apartment. However, I know that it's hard to see a nice landscape kitty-corner from an apartment in the city such as Seoul. Fortunately, my apartment complex has a nice garden which has lots of cherry blossom trees. Sometimes, I am out in the garden with my family, and enjoy the picnic. So, I'm satisfied with my apartment even though I cannot enjoy the landscape kitty-corner from my apartment.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Although I don\'t live in a big city like you, there is also nothing spectacular about the view kitty-corner from my apartment. It\'s just an auto-shack center with lots of cars.  Please check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!My apartment is in a very big apartment complex. >> CORRECT!There are approximately 700 units in it. >> CORRECT!In addition to my apartment complex, there are several big apartment complex near hear. >> CORRECT! *hereSo I can see another apartment building kitty-corner from my apartment. >> CORRECT!I wish I can see a nice landscape kitty-corner from my apartment. >> CORRECT!However, I know that it\'s hard to see a nice landscape kitty-corner from an apartment in the city such as Seoul. >> However, I know that it\'s hard to see a nice landscape kitty-corner from an apartment in a city such as Seoul.Fortunately, my apartment complex has a nice garden which has lots of cherry blossom trees. >> CORRECT!Sometimes, I am out in the garden with my family, and enjoy the picnic. >> Sometimes I go out and enjoy a picnic in the garden with my family.So, I\'m satisfied with my apartment even though I cannot enjoy the landscape kitty-corner from my apartment. >> CORRECT!

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