homework

I picked up white and black crayons. White crayon is good and black one is evil. The two colors are stirred up and then they become gray. So I cannot get to distinguish between good and evil. So I must endure unjust treat with tolerance or try to have wise judgment as I get older.

      Hi Hwa Shin, A wonderful evening to you ^^   Another great ideas from you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in this composition. Good job! ^^ See you in class.   Teacher Glenda   Here are my corrections:   I picked up white and black crayons. >> Correct or >> I would choose colors white and black. White crayon is good and black one is evil. >> Correct or >> Color white represents good while black is evil.The two colors are stirred up and then they become gray. >> Correct or >> When the tow colors are stirred up, it becomes gray.So I cannot get to distinguish between good and evil. >> So I won\'t be abvle to distinguish good from evil.So I must endure unjust treat with tolerance or try to have wise judgment as I get older. >> So I must endure unjust treatment with tolerance or to have wise judgement as I get older.