homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Last month, I learned a phrase, “a day that a fox gets married” by heart from my mother.
That means a day that a rainy with no cloud in the sky.
That phrase comes from an old story.
Long times ago, there was a cloud who loves a fox.
One day, the fox got married with a tiger, and the cloud was heartbroken.
However, the cloud wanted the fox to be happy so he just cried with bright face.
That is because we call “a fox gets married” when the rain in the clear sky.
Since a fox gets married with a tiger, we also say “a day that a tiger gets married”.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Sarah!
Thank you for doing your homework.
This is such a lovely, but heartbreaking story!
I felt bad for the cloud.
Thanks for sharing this story with me.
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Last month, I learned a phrase, “a day that a fox gets married” by heart from my mother.
>> Last month, I learned the phrase, “a day that a fox gets married” by heart from my mother.
That means a day that a rainy with no cloud in the sky.
>> That means a rainy day with no clouds in the sky.That phrase comes from an old story.
>> CORRECT!Long times ago, there was a cloud who loves a fox.
>> A long time ago, there was a cloud who loves a fox.One day, the fox got married with a tiger, and the cloud was heartbroken.
>> CORRECT!However, the cloud wanted the fox to be happy so he just cried with bright face.
>> However, the cloud wanted the fox to be happy so it just cried with a bright face.
That is because we call “a fox gets married” when the rain in the clear sky.
>> That is why when the sky is clear and bright but it is raining, we say \"the fox is getting married\".Since a fox gets married with a tiger, we also say “a day that a tiger gets married”.
>> Since the fox got married with a tiger, we also call that \"the day when the tiger got married\".
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